Alaska Governor Sean Parnell is trying to find a way to get Polar Bears off the Endangered Species list, he has made accusations about some people improperly using the Endangered Species Act. This could harm Alaska's main source of revenue, petroleum development.
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Nice Summary, I try to keep up with these kind of stories. I think its so sad when species become endangered.
ReplyDeleteGood job. This is sad I love Polar Bears.
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• These are two sentences: Alaska Governor Sean Parnell is trying to find a way to get Polar Bears off the Endangered Species list, he has made accusations about some people improperly using the Endangered Species Act.
• Polar bears doesn't need to be capitalized
• Should be a colon instead of a comma after revenue